When my hands no longer dwell in yours,
Will you remember…
The promise whispered within your embrace,
In the haven of a surreal twilight.
When your eyes can’t find me anymore,
Will you remember…
My undone self that held your gaze,
In silence that cradled unspoken words.
When my voice fades into the void,
Will you remember…
The serenade of my spirit,
That sang your hidden wounds away.
When you feel a cold so cold,
Will you remember…
The heat of our carnal forms,
Scorched by passion unbound.
When you feel solitude swelling,
Will you remember…
Our memories and stories still anew,
Thriving in the safe recesses of our hearts.
And when time moves mellowing you down,
I would have adorned a shroud,
As I would your arms,
For I would have phased into an unworldly serenity,
Waiting by a promise,
The promise whispered within your embrace,
In the haven of a surreal twilight,
To come back to me…
Will you remember?
Another great poem!
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Hey thanks! 🙂
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You know it’s a good one, when it remains with you long after reading. That was beautiful, thank you! 🙂
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You are full of appreciation 🙂 Thank you for reading it!
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Deep…..wonderful….
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Thank you 🙂
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I remembered all the tragedies in my past! 😦
A great, sad poem. Thanks
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You poor thing! I’m so sorry 😦
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No problem!;)
I was trying to forget my past with my loved person, and this beautiful poem reset all my efforts.
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It’s alright, it will get better! I hope you get over your sad past! 😦
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Thank you Dear Swetha:)
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Beautiful
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Thank you! 🙂
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touching and bringing to life the old dusted memories. How each word and every sentence coalesced into a meaning and then a feeling that touched something very deep ! This is very beautiful Swetha . . .
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Thank you Nithin for a very rewarding and uplifting review of the post 🙂
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beautiful and sad at the same time
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Thanks 🙂
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Beautiful dream
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Thanks! 🙂
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Excellently worded… Superb poem. I like the art. Is it drawn by you Swetha? You are really super talented.
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Oh such a lovely comment! Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. I am sort of an artist but the featured image is not my work.:|
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The hunger for love is much more difficult to remove than the hunger for bread.
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Yes us humans are driven by the need to love and be loved.
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Very serene picture and wording. I have a few like this. It is fun to find and expand on such beauty:)
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I agree:)
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🙂
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